Hi, Can you please provide feedback on my submission.
thanks,

Hi there! Here is my logo proposal. can you Please send me your feedback.
and let me know if this is close to your wishes.
thanks.

Hi....

May I have your feedback for my designs?

To all Designers.

We would like to say a big thank you for all the designs you have submitted. We very much appreciate the time and effort you put in to doing these.
We have not yet been able to reply to every designer regarding your design - We will endeavour to provide feedback to as many as we can.

Once again thank you for participating.
Regards
Simon