Can i have feedback on my proposal

Thanks in Advance!
Neela

Thank you to all of the designers. We have a few more days left in the contest so please continue to submit ideas. We will be meeting tomorrow morning to discuss the submissions to date, so if you have been working on a submission, please submit them within the next 18 hours. We will continue to accept submissions up to the deadline of the contest, but the elimination process will start tomorrow.