feedback plz.

hi,
can you provide me feedback?

Good afternoon. Please check my works. Thank you very much.

hi i tried out this contest, could you please give me feedback?

Hello Sir,
First of all thank you so much for your invitation.
Can you please make this project guaranteed?

Awaits your reply
Amit Rohara

Hi,

I've submitted a design.
Would be great to get your feedback and please do not hesitate to ask for changes.

Kind regards,

Hello!
I'm waiting for feedback!
Can i use some tag line?