feedback me on design 33237928 and 33237929 , thanks

please check my design, #33238348, #33238349, regards.

Dear Please Check my designs
I hope you like them
Thank you

Hello,
I've submitted designs with a very interesting concept
(on design #33260954 and its linked designs).
Your feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you!

Your creative feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you!

Can you tell me what you don’t like on this design? Much appreciated.