please sir check my design #33160544,, feedback please i will wait for your feedback thank you..

plz chq #33160892

plz chq #33161050 too

I will wait for all designs to be submitted then I will comment, thank you so much for your submission.

I will wait for all designs to be submitted then I will comment, thank you so much for your submission.

Feedback please. Thanks

Please check and feedback, because for beginners like me it is very helpful and needed,thanks.