feedback please!

Hi Project Owner, Please Kindly Check My Design #32805507, If you want change font, colour or anything don't hesitate to tell me. Thank You

Hey contest holder, feedback please...

Dear All designer,

For your information, we will use this logo on our candy products packaging.
So, it should be playful, cheerful and attractive logo. Not a formal logo.
Maybe you can google candy packaging for more references.

Thankyou.

Hello,
I've submitted designs with a very interesting concept.
Your feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you!