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Hello,
Please review my design and let me know your thoughts.

Best.

Greetings Designers:
Thank you for all of the designs so far...I appreciate all of your creativity!
So far, the designs that have 4 or more stars are the logos that are meeting, or exceeding, my expectations. I want this new logo to be:
CLEAR
SHARP
BOLD
SIMPLE
...and very VERY readable....meaning I want each word to stand-out on its own.

Some of the current designs, while certainly very artistic, are not clear enough to understand what the words are.

Again, thank you for all of your time and efforts and I will continue to assess and rate each design based on what I have just outlined in this message.

With Appreciation,
Paul

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