Feedback please #29871996

hello sir,
please check my design, #29873792, #29873793.
thanks and regards.

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Please have a look my design #29874977
Thank you!

Regarding the green color. After looking over designs I only want a small amount of green and it needs to be a dark green. You can try dark red or burnt orange but outside of that I want it to look pretty neutral.

Hello, Take a look at my submission, looking forward to hear your feedback.