Feedback please #29865385

hello sir,
please check my design, #29881655, #29881656.
thanks and regards.

Dear Sir,
Possible to give feedback on design #29883991 would be much appreciate.
Thanks.

feedback, please!

Reference the logo [Non image link removed]
Keep cellebration lowercase
make the "C" thinner.
No tagline under the name

I added a new image to the brief with something that looks more to what I want to see. The big C drawing and inside of it starts cellebration in lower-case. Make it look better, make something custom! everything is copy and paste AI tools logos. We are close to a final design but I need someone to step it up and show me a design that has actually work on it. I am giving very direct instructions and visual references.

feedback me on my submitted new design 29888846 , thanks

This is my concept and you´re not allowed to share as reference