feedback me on design 29791889 and 29791890 , thanks

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Hi,

I hope this message finds you well. I just wanted to reach out and see if you had any feedback on the logo concept I submitted for the design contest. I'd love to get your feedback to help improve the design to your liking, so any feedback you have would be greatly appreciated. My design Id is #29792919

I also wanted to wish all of the other participants the best of luck. There are so many talented designers participating, and I'm sure the final result will be amazing.

Thanks,
Lamber Val

Hello, Kindly check my submission, thank you so much