Hi, any valuable creative feedback you can supply to design #29607413 is greatly appreciated. Thank You!

please provide any feedback on design #29614503 if u like the design!

Hi any feedback after suggested changes is greatly appreciated. Thank You!

I did not have a chance to submit my designs for this logo - are you still looking for new logos? If so I would love to work with you on this project. This is a fantastic idea for a business and I have some great logos to show you. :)