feedback me on design 29275672 and 29275673 , thanks

yours is currently one of the top two we like.

Please provide your feedback into my design, so i could give any variation if you want.
Its public comment box here :)

Hello. I am assuming the logo is the state of Michigan and Lake Superior? Can the state look a little more like our state, outline wise behind the wording and can the other I am assuming is Lake Superior look more like the lake? I would attach a photo but dont see a way to do it here. Thanks Sean

please take a look on my revised design 29295113 ( and go into that and feedback me inside of that )
so then i could give revision easily , its public comment box here , hope you understand :)

still waiting for your feedback on my revised design :)