feedback please on design #29216956 and #29216957 , thanks

hello sir,
please check my design, #29217973, #29217975.
thanks and regards.

(#29219356) feed back would be nice.

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Please check my design #29221676 and let me know; if you need more changes, please advise me, and don't hesitate to ask for a revision.
Thanks!