Would like to get your views on my concept.

dear designers,
thank you so much for your sketches so far! I'm afraid my brief has been a bit misleading, so please check out my updated version including sketches I made on my own.
thank you so much for your effort!

dear neil,

you were the first one to create something going in the direction I tried to communicate in my brief. please check out my updated version and sketches. it would be great if you could dig into a more ornamental style. i don't need to use a well recognizable logo in my profession, i would rather have a design that people look at an say: "this is really artistic" - considered my patients being quite ordinary people. ;) i hope this was helpful and i'd love to see more of your ideas!

Revision is submitted.
Will wait for your respose.

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #29143659). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED.

Hello. You chose a winner before the project deadline ended. I did the work, but did not have time to send it. So that my project does not go to waste, I can send my design to you by e-mail.