feedback me on my submission design #28990150 and #28990151 , thanks

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Please provide feedback on submission #28990749 and relate any changes needed in color of font size/type.
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Hi, would you like plane landed or flying?

hello sir,
please check my design, #28991325, #28991326.
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please check my design #28991338 and #28991339 ,regards

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Hi,
Would appreciate it much to receive any feedback you have for my design concepts. Thank you

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#28990410

still waiting for your next feedback about my revised design #28996281 , thanks