feedback please on design #28685118 and #28685119 , regards

dear sir ,
#28685777 this is my design no . i hope you like this design. if you want any changes please sent me a feedback . i do my best for you . thank you.

hello project owner,

please check my designs and give your valuable feedback.
if you want more changes to design let me know.

(#28690916),(#28690927)

thank you