please sir check my design feedback please i will wait for your feedback Thank you

Hi Respected Sir/Ma'am

I hope you're fine and doing great!

Please review the designs and let me know how are they,

I hope you'll love them.

And please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes

I'll be waiting for your valuable feedback

Thank you :)

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on my design #28684980 and #28684981 just to check if I'm on the right track.
If you don't like entries please just eliminate them outright or leave unrated (low rating 1-3 stars damages designers overall rating).
Thanks for understanding and good luck with the project.