feedback please on design #28654106 and #28654107 , regards.

please check my submission #28654244 and feedback please

Hello,
Please review my design and let me know your thoughts.

Best.

hello sir,
please check my design, #28657658.
thanks and regards.

Hello. Thank you for your submissions. I like the designs, they are creative. But would like to see more of a smaller square design if you can try to modify??

thanks a lot ,
let's check my revised design #28659465 and give me your feedback on my revised design personally , thanks

I do not see any change from the previous designs...

Not bad, can you try with a different font? With black and white

Thank you for your creativity. It is not what we are looking for, sorry.

check new submission design #28662989 and #28662990 ( i changed font shape here so now it looks more squared ) and feedback me on that ,. thanks