please check my submission #28623778 and feedback please

Hello... Please check and feedback my design :) #28626576

Please let me know your thoughts about my design, "Note If You Don't Like My Design Just Simply Eliminate It" #28628217

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28655012 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)

Thx for 5 Star Rating let me know if you have any more wishes. Best Mario