Please provide feedback on my design..

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on my design #28602921 just to check if I'm on the right track.
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Thanks for understanding and good luck with the project.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28605206 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)

Hello. Check, please design. If something needs to change, write to me. Thank you!
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/28605649
Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo.

Hello dear Contest Holder. Just to wish you the best of luck to your contest and let you know that I'm at your service for any input as so far. Kindest regards, artespraticas