please check my submission #28468712 and feedback please

Sir please check my design #28468831 and feedback please. Thank you.

hi, please check my revised design based on your latest brief updates #28477289 and #28477289. Thank you

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on my design (#28498773) just to check if I'm on the right track.
If you don't like entries please just eliminate them outright or leave unrated (low rating 1-3 stars damages designers overall rating).
Thanks for understanding and good luck with the project.