feedback please on design #28223801 and #28223802 , regards

hello sir,
please check my design, #28223904, #28223905, #28223906, #28223907.
thanks and regards.

Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #28225861 would be much-appreciated .
Regards.

sir kindly remove 1 star rating. it's very harmful as a designer. if you don't like it simply eliminate it without rating. thanks for your understanding

Dear Sir,
Please don't 1 & a 2-star rating, this damages our public profile, simply 3 stars or eliminates the design that you don't like.
Thanks a lot.