Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Dear sir/ma'am, Am I in the right direction? Please check my submission and provide your valuable feedback for my design #28060165 ... Hope you gonna love this.... Feel free to ask for any kind of change or modifications... And please don't give 1 star or 2 stars rating, it's DAMAGE designer's ranking.... :( :(
regards... :) (stay safe stay home)

Hey
provide feedback to this design #28063627
also if you want any changes then feel free to tell me

thanks