Hi, I submitted an entry; please review the design (#27998344), and please provide direct feedback on my entry. I hope to hear you soon. Thank you!

hello sir,
please check my design, #27998704, #27998705, #27998706.
thanks and regards.

I look forward to your feedback and evaluation of my work. Thanks

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on my design (#28030500) just to check if I'm on the right track.
If you don't like entries please just eliminate them outright or leave unrated (low rating 1-3 stars damages designers overall rating).
Thanks for understanding and good luck with the project.