please sir check my design #27591078),, feedback please

feedback please!

Please have a look #27610437 & #27610438.

waiting for your valuable feedback and rating. If you don't like my design, please eliminate it rather than giving 1/2/3 star rating.

Thank you!

Dear Contest Holder, if there’s anything else I can do with any of my entries just let me know. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas