feedback please..thanks

Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.  

Hi,

Thanks for rating me :)
If You want any changes Please let me know.
I'm always ready to deliver you unlimited revisions until your satisfaction.
Looking forward for your response.

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Hi Project Owner,

I have submitted my design. Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction. If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .

Thanks & regards.

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