Please sir check my design #26225584

Hello,
Possible feedback on my design would be muchly appreciated.
Thank you.

Hi there,

Please provide your feedback on my design concept.

Thanks & Kind Regards,
Design Nation.

it seems like most are trying to just do small/color changes. I really need a more "modern" look to the logo

please check my new submisison design #26237099 and #26237100 , and feedback me on them , regards

please check my design. happy to revise it again if needed. thanks :)

please check my design. happy to revise it again if needed. thanks :)