feedback please on design 25667233 and 25667234 , regards

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating.

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feedback please on my designs. Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.
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please check my updated design 25681633 , and give me your comment about it , regards