Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating.

Best.

Thank you for the rating.
If you think that there is any room to update the logo to perfect, please let me know that.
Will be waiting for next message.

Best.

Hi There,

I have submitted my designs and I really appreciate if you can provide me a feedback.

Thank You.