hello sir, please provide feedback on my design #25133927 and #25133928... thanks ...

Hi Project Owner,

I have submitted my design . Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction. If you would like some changes in the design feel free to say that .

Thanks & regards.

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