Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.

please check my new design

Hi there
Please check my design and do not hesitate for any change.
Regards

Hey Client,
Please don't give low ratings - one and two stars. Because low ratings lead the designer's rating to a crash. If you do not like a design, you better eliminate it without putting one or two stars. Thank you for your understanding.

Feedback please

if there is no result/update in the next few days, I will withdraw my design.
thank you for your understanding