Hi I submitted an entry please review design (#23925137) and (#23925138) hope to hear your feedback. thanks

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #23926483, #23926484, #23926485, #23926486..
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.