I have submitted modern logo style. Please give your feedback for the logo design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

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