Feedback Design(#22684000), please. :)

hello,
sir/madam!
can you get only positive feedback on my design if possible.
thank you..!

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

Hi there,
I have submitted your logo design
Please advise if on the right track, will gladly make changes to improve.
Please Send your valuable feedback. Your positive Feed back matter me lot.
Thank you .
Design ID -#22716957

so much hope....