Greetings. Could you please rate my submissions and provide me your opinion?

Hello,
I have submitted my designs and I really appreciate if you can provide me a feedback.
Thank You.

Hello,
Please provide me suggestions and feedbacks on #22371429 and #22371430 so that I can provide
a better design for your brand.
Thank You.

Hi,
Please Check my submissions, If you want any changes please inform me?

Thank you:)