feedback please...

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks.

Hi there,
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief.
If you need any further assistance, customization or adjustments on the design, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Mock-ups shown on this preview are used for presentation purposes only.
Please take a moment to rate and provide feedback on the designs I've submitted.
Cheers and Thanks,
Slant Line Media

Berikan tanggapan Anda tentang konsep desain saya # 22140651

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hope your valuable feedback and rating on my design(#22164334)



Thank you