feedback please...

Hi there! I just submitted my entry today and carefully crafted my submission, Kindly check design (#21966346), (#21966345) and (#21966344). I look forward to see your feedback. Thanks!

Hi sir. I did the changes I did. I posted a new plan
I hope your satisfaction will increase. Do not hesitate please
Tell me if you have to change again
With respect:

doesn't the 3 stripes remind you of anything?