sir kindly please check my submission design #20359235 ,#20359236 and #20359237 and give me your valuable feedback please

Revised versions are submitted please check these.
Thanks

Hello contest holder,

I have uploaded my design #20367558 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.

sir please check #20378436

Hi Logo Kil,

I'm wondering where you went? We were planning on choosing your design but it is no longer there?

sir please take a look on my design #20509530 , #20509532 and #20509533 , regards