Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

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Feedback & rating would be much appreciated thanks! - #19169899

#19179274 , Please Check. Ask for more modification if I'm on right track. Thanks.

Thanks for your rating! Let me know if you would like anything added or changed! :)

what exactly you have in mind ? can You please explain so we can re think ?
I weould like to request you to explain me your thoughts so i can again try
i want to learn from my mistakes .. give me one more chance and explain what exactly you want ?

what exactly you have in mind ? can You please explain so we can re think ?
I weould like to request you to explain me your thoughts so i can again try
i want to learn from my mistakes .. give me one more chance and explain what exactly you want ?