Feedback please

I just added a revision for this logo design project.
I would like the first line to be: Sketch - Journal - Record
with a subline of: Books by Justine Riley
I would like the Sketch - Journal - Record to be able to stand alone as a logo with or without the Books by Justine Riley

Serif font is what I would like as it is most common for books and printed material. I feel it would be a better fit for this logo

See Contest (#18671170) and Contest (#18671171)

feedback please , design #18672523 and #18672524 ,regards

Feedback please.

Most of the designs I have received are using all uppercase letters for both Sketch-Journal-Record
and
Books by Justine Riley. And they are using san serif fonts which I don't love for the Sketch-Journal Record part of the logo
I think this makes the design look very generic.
I want "Sketch" and "Journal" and "Record" to have the same visual weight.
I want the design to reflect the books that I make. You can see these books at
www.SketchJournalRecord.com

Uploaded more images and named them "Visual References 1 thru 6". An Image of tools I use. An image of the spine of my books, I feel this is one thing that sets them apart from other makers.

Also I have doodled a bit combining some of your ideas and mine. I am trying to create a more specific direction for folks to look towards.

This is my first Design Crowd project so if I should use the program differently as I rate or critique your projects please give me a heads up.

Thanks Justine

Hi, Check out our new submissions and give your comments.

I just added an image labeled "Colors for the Tools". I really like some of the recent designs. I would like to see what the tools look like with color added. Use the provided image for color reference. Thanks Justine