Thanks for the note and I hope you are doing well also! I have reviewed your submission and it strikes me as being very professional, and very corporate. Bold text, but not a bold statement if that makes any sense. I do like them and think that they are usable - but I think we are leaning towards wanting something more dramatic, less formal. Something that would ill-suited to embroider on a polo, out of the box. 

This is a product that makes a dramatic statement and is unique in the world, We would like the logo to reflect these attributes. Thanks!