feedback pls on design #16794616

Hi there,

Kindly provide your feedback on my submissions.

Thanks,
Design Nation.

Hello,

I had a problem with the server yesterday when trying to upload my design. Here's a link to the artwork I created on my dropbox. I know that submissions are closed but I'd rather you take a look. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Thanks. https://www.dropbox.com/s/4mdzhq393hwdzyp/r.png?dl=0