Sir, If ur interested to give me the chance please give me a feedback

feedback please..

Hi, thanks for the design.

The reason I gave it the rating I did was that at the moment it isn't working as one connected design with all of the elements connected and working together. The graphic device is very large and won't work on mobile well, one of my key requirements.

The graphic element doesn't feel like it adds anything but without it the text will look bland and uninteresting. The colours are OK and the font is Ok but there are better designs in the contest so far.

I hope that helps.

I do not know why I sent your illustration, but in the upload preview, you are still watching another contest, I can not solve this problem can you help me, before the expiration date?

Dear sir can i use script font ?

Hi, no, I need a font that works well on mobile websites and script fonts are too complex to read on mobile.