Please give me some suggestions and feedback so that I can improve my design ? If you have something else in mind help me and write me that so I can come up with complete new versions . Please check my portfolio and profile and see what I can do for you .

With regards
Kim.

Some feedback would be great.Thanks

Hi,
looking forward to your feedback for my submission
Any suggestions would be helpful in finding the perfect design for you.

Regards
Shakuna

Please let me know if you wish to see any revision on my concepts.
Will be glad to serve you.