Feedback on my design please.

Dear Design Sky
thanks for submitting a design so promptly. We are looking for something simpler and more dynamic.

Dear Design Sky
thanks for submitting a design so promptly. We are looking for something simpler and more dynamic.

Thanks to everybody who has submitted a design already.....we have amended our brief to since we have failed to mention earlier that we are looking for a logo that is not only modern but also expresses the dynamic nature of the performance analysis our business offers

Thanks to everybody who has submitted a design already.....we have amended our brief to since we have failed to mention earlier that we are looking for a logo that is not only modern but also expresses the dynamic nature of the performance analysis our business offers

Hi...Please check my designs :)

Aside from feedback for my recent submission, I'd also like to ask another question: Do we designers have to include possible business card designs along with the logo design?

We did include business card design in the request, but if I understand the rules correctly than you only start with the business card design once the logo is chosen.

we like your logo incorporating the horse within the writing, at the moment it is a jumping horse, our business is mainly dressage and racehorses....would it be possible to have a generic horse so that people don't think we only do jumpers?

#11769340 Feedback please. Thanks.

Okay, I'll try revising it accordingly.