Feedback on my design please.

Would you all be ever so kind I apologize I have had a change of heart and now have a clear vision of where I and going with this. Please consider looking at my new brief? Thank you and sorry

Would you all be ever so kind I apologize I have had a change of heart and now have a clear vision of where I and going with this. Please consider looking at my new brief? Thank you and sorry

Hi, any updates?

Well yes, my partners weren't completely wow'ed but what can you do I will be getting back to you by the end of the day.
Thank you.

Send me a private message anytime. Thanks.