Hi,

Your valuable feedback / comments on my designs please.
Thanks,

Feedback please

Thanks for your attempt, Jenny.
But your work do not meet the requirements of brief:
- Simple and readable
- Trendy, but not copy/paste
- Vivid

Also they are too similar to the option that I attached with the mark "Shouldn't be like the one in attachment."

Hi,
Sorry for long waiting for answer and thanks for your attempt.
What I don't like is that logo/idea has no fundamental reason for stripes/arrows.
Such kind of logo's with complicated shape is difficult to read on screens, cards and too difficult to animate.