Hi

This is Brent and I submitted some designs earlier for you. Would you by any chance have any feedback, suggestions or edits that you would like to see?

I look forward to hearing from you

Sincerely
Brent

HI 
    My name is Alisha and i also submitted some designs for your review and i would love to have some feedback as well.
        Respectfully yours,
                Alisha B.