any feedback?

Hello...can you give me feedback on my submit? just to know if am on the right track.thx

Your design is on the right track. But I still need more feedback from my group. However, in the meantime, one question has been raised. As the basketball coach's name is Shaka Smart, is there a way to keep the integrity of your design but emphasize the word "Smart?" Thanks for your good work.

ok thx for the feedback. I'll expand on that :)

Feedback please for my design.