Dear Sir/Madam,

May I have your feedback please?
I see you've mentioned my submission concept in your brief and as far as I understand you like it, yet, I've never heard from you. Should I have anything re-worked or come up with something new?
If my concept fits, would you like to see a stationary with it?

Please let me know.

Best regards,
Arthur

Hi
Kindly let us know if you selected any of the designs you received
Pls take a look at my submissions :)

Thanks
Hussain